description coming soon <3
I am sorry to all you who think this is confusing. If you continue to read the next chapters as well as the coming ones...I think it should all start to make more sense! I am sorry I cannot give anymore clues than that. :) Enjoy!!
It's a little confusing, but I'm sure you can edit that. Other than that it's a pretty good start(:
Thank you all for your comments!! Greatly appreciated!! I have Chapter II out now...feel free to read that!! Thank you!!
i agree with tianajade about having reraders want to read more!! I voted and fanned:D and i will read the rest on my ipod!!!
Really interesting and intense. It leaves so many things unanswered, which makes readers want to turn to the next page. A description would be good, so we know what it's about (: A few grammar and punctuation errors that need fixing up. Good start though, keep writing!
Wow!! Crazy just took a front seat with this dude. Love it so far.