The Magic Shop of Creation

The Magic Shop of Creation

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Bradley By repossible Updated Jun 06, 2018

A vortex of tiny gift-wrapped boxes floats in a swirl of pixie light above a counter in a shop where a man stands polishing ... well, something. 

It's clear you have to choose one of the gifts, but which one? Are they all good? What if you choose a bad one? Is there an exchange policy?

Wait. Is this all a dream? Oh, wouldn't he like to know.

Then he hears the words. From a tiny girl. In the palm of his hand. On the merry-go-round. Just two words. He can't not react. But how? What can he do?

  • dreams
  • magic
  • paranormal
  • psychic-abilities
  • supernatural
  • youngadult
KatherineSislow KatherineSislow Dec 27, 2017
Love this line. The conversation between Lu and the Shopkeep is fascinating!!
KatherineSislow KatherineSislow Dec 27, 2017
Wow. This was a whirlwind of rather beautiful prose and confusing situations. Don't get me wrong, I'm confused in a good way. Well, perhaps I'm a bit frustrated that I don't have any other parts to follow this up with, but you sure have me interested!