Heart and Mind

Heart and Mind

686 Reads 10 Votes 11 Part Story
Angie By Written_Blue_Prints Updated May 26, 2011

19 year old Azalea Helen had lived a very destructive life. Nine months prior to an accident, that left her on her death bed, she falls in love with a man that pulls her deep into the hole she's gets lost in. After she wakes up from three minutes of being dead, she realized she is blind and continues down a path of restoration and a new life, With many ups and downs and a force trying to pull her back into what she once was. It is a struggle to not turn back and to try to better her life and be better for her little brother. It becomes a challenge to do whats right and battles with her heart and mind.

HeatherMcCorkle HeatherMcCorkle Mar 02, 2011
The beginning piqued my interest and definitely made me want to read more! Starting with her death really makes me curious as to where the story is leading. Loved it and voted!
AvengedSevenfoldGirl AvengedSevenfoldGirl Mar 02, 2011
Great beginning - I love this start and I can't wait to read on :)
dontemm dontemm Mar 02, 2011
Good chapter, but once again the run-on sentences...Watch 'em
CorNic CorNic Mar 02, 2011
Pretty good!! I like the concept of it. The only real thing I could notice was grammar error, but that can easily be fixed!! :) keep it going !! ;D
dontemm dontemm Mar 02, 2011
It's an interesting start to an intersting-sounding story. There are some punctuation and grammaratical errors, but other than that it's good. Watch the run-ons...
Written_Blue_Prints Written_Blue_Prints Feb 16, 2011
Like don't like leave me a comment...Good Start, bad start??