This is a fantasy story. I am only 11 years old!
Ya, read the next 2 chapters and the i think you will get it!!
@spick123 because we dont know what the stone is, who they are, where they are or what theyre doing, but im sure it will become clearer as you write more :)
@jadzaa What part is confusing for you,..... i am working on adding more details to my work. Thanx for the feedback!
bit confusing but it's just the start of the story, i can't beleive youre 11 you write so well!
@mor_asha Thannk you!!! I am going to add another chapter 2morrow!!! i think you will like the next chapter to!!
very impressed with this story. i love the opening and love where it is headed keep up the fantastic work