Vamanight High (On Hold Until Mindless Killer is done)

Vamanight High (On Hold Until Mindless Killer is done)

8 Part Story 2K Reads 107 Votes
Winnie By winniewowinn Updated Dec 25, 2012

As an orphan, Alice know how to take care of herself and just what to say or do to survive in this world. But when a mysterious man arrives and offers her a comfortable home and school, how could she refuse?  Yet Vamanight High was nothing of the ordinary. Castle-like school? Always dark and gloomy weather? Something's not right.It might look beautiful and posh inside , but the students are oddly divided into classes. The most bizarre thing wasn't this though. It was how flawless everyone look including the teachers. Now Alice truly question herself, What is this place, What are they, and why, is she here.

genderequalist genderequalist Feb 03, 2013 04:03AM
SUCH AN AMAZING STORY ! your a great writer ! I'll read The next chapter because it's really intriguing !
azuraisblue azuraisblue Feb 03, 2013 01:52AM
there're some mistakes but besides that i like how you write this. voted! :))
winniewowinn winniewowinn Jan 06, 2013 09:05AM
@CamilleStorm Thank you, I made the cover myself:)
                                    Please do and let me know what you think:)
MistakesWeMake MistakesWeMake Jan 06, 2013 08:16AM
I really like the line, "fight your own fight." And this is a really good beginning to what is (from what I can tell) going to be a great novel!
winniewowinn winniewowinn Dec 21, 2012 04:48PM
@zebzy1 Aw thank you:) It means a lot to me that you like it:)
winniewowinn winniewowinn Nov 16, 2012 06:05PM
@JessieC74 Oh thanks:) and thanks for reading Mindless Killer as well:)
                                    
                                    @XxdragongirlxX thanks I will keep a lookout for my grammar mistakes:)