Vamanight High (On Hold Until Mindless Killer is done)

Vamanight High (On Hold Until Mindless Killer is done)

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Winnie By julythirdnintyfive Updated Dec 25, 2012

As an orphan, Alice know how to take care of herself and just what to say or do to survive in this world. But when a mysterious man arrives and offers her a comfortable home and school, how could she refuse?  Yet Vamanight High was nothing of the ordinary. Castle-like school? Always dark and gloomy weather? Something's not right.It might look beautiful and posh inside , but the students are oddly divided into classes. The most bizarre thing wasn't this though. It was how flawless everyone look including the teachers. Now Alice truly question herself, What is this place, What are they, and why, is she here.

genderequalist genderequalist Feb 03, 2013
SUCH AN AMAZING STORY ! your a great writer ! I'll read The next chapter because it's really intriguing !
azuraisblue azuraisblue Feb 03, 2013
there're some mistakes but besides that i like how you write this. voted! :))
julythirdnintyfive julythirdnintyfive Jan 06, 2013
@CamilleStorm Thank you, I made the cover myself:)
                              Please do and let me know what you think:)
MistakesWeMake MistakesWeMake Jan 06, 2013
I really like the line, "fight your own fight." And this is a really good beginning to what is (from what I can tell) going to be a great novel!
julythirdnintyfive julythirdnintyfive Dec 21, 2012
@zebzy1 Aw thank you:) It means a lot to me that you like it:)
julythirdnintyfive julythirdnintyfive Nov 16, 2012
@JessieC74 Oh thanks:) and thanks for reading Mindless Killer as well:)
                              
                              @XxdragongirlxX thanks I will keep a lookout for my grammar mistakes:)