Gaea

Gaea

3K Reads 331 Votes 31 Part Story
Bentu12 By Bentu12 Completed

A  short novel about interstellar colonization, the dangers of scientific discovery, and the end of the world. Image credit goes to Space Engine.

  • aliens
  • apocalypse
  • extraterrestrial
  • fiction
  • interstellar
  • science
  • sciencefiction
  • scifi
  • space
  • speculative
  • star
  • starship
mikediamond1992 mikediamond1992 Jun 24, 2018
Such a good cliff hanger! I'm excited to see where this goes next!
mikediamond1992 mikediamond1992 Jun 24, 2018
I really like this! You have a really unique tone/voice, very calm yet engaging. Excited to read the next parts!
                              
                              Just out of curiosity, was there anything in particular that inspired you to write this? It reminds me a bit of another author I like (in a good way!)
bitterfiend bitterfiend Aug 09, 2018
this is amazing, love how you use many facts such as the star's age. makes me wanna research this typa thing again lmao
knotanumber knotanumber Dec 21, 2018
Overall, a strong chapter. Builds steadily, sets a good pace and has some nice details. Could use some tightening up here and there.
knotanumber knotanumber Dec 21, 2018
The tone here feels off. "Emerged victorious" feels particularly out of place.
knotanumber knotanumber Dec 21, 2018
Not bad but could use some tightening. For example, "in history" is a throwaway phrase and you just restate the fanfare  in the 2nd sentence using different words.