This is the first of many fanfic a I will be writing for NCIS LA. Please comment even if it's bad. All Feedback is welcome.
It's really good but in some places there are not any punctuations. Besides that it's great.
Cool I can't wait to read it!! And yeah dean in the new eps is a lil better than in the old ones but like are u up to date on all things supernatural cuz I don't wanna give anything away for you
Plz update I wanna read more lol Ik it's just the first chapter but I know ima like the book :)