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Renewing Andrea

Renewing Andrea

486 Reads 6 Votes 2 Part Story
Eijnos By Eijnos Updated Mar 07, 2011

Andrea is a 26 yr old woman who is desperately trying to forget her past indiscretions and is paying a heavy price for her mistakes. Now living as Liliana Stevens, she owns a boutique and is living in South Florida all while trying to keep a low profile. That is until her past walks up to her and brings back all of the memories and fears of her former life. Can she hold on to all that she's worked so hard for or will she be forced to start over.

kinkytwister kinkytwister Mar 08, 2011
Nice. Sorry I haven't gotten to read your story until now. The story is still developing so it will probably be a few more chapters before I understand and get psyched about to the story, but great beginning!
Shannyeight Shannyeight Mar 03, 2011 the other reader stated- that was my main issue...the jumping back and forth between 1st and 3rd person. Other than that, the story had a nice start...just pick a point of view, and keep writing!
Eijnos Eijnos Feb 17, 2011
                               thanks so much for the feed back and I really appreciate the suggestion I thought that way was better too but I wanted to try something and and no course i'll return the favor thanks a bunch again