Keep Me Forever

Keep Me Forever

104 Reads 3 Votes 1 Part Story
HI LIFE By 50STATEKIDZ Completed

My personel' experience of how I feel when it comes to the one I love.

50STATEKIDZ 50STATEKIDZ Jan 25, 2011
@xpeoplexpersonx thankss soo much ! i really lovee yerr feedback ! yerr comment is likee my most favoritee rite now ! L-O-V-E ! haha !
Lynfalling Lynfalling Oct 15, 2010
Very nice. Just the right hint of hesitation thrown into your words to make it all seem real. Here's a vote for you....
50STATEKIDZ 50STATEKIDZ Oct 15, 2010
@AnnaRose21Thanks soooo much ! I know thys one I didn't really need to think about. It just somehow came out that way . I'm going through things nowadays so you can expect more of these ! Please comment and vote tell me if you went threw the same thing !
AnnaRose21 AnnaRose21 Oct 14, 2010
I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE.... It says a lot for me. I've felt like that several times in my life.. I love your poems... they are excellent.