Baby Human And The Vampire (Under going editing)

Baby Human And The Vampire (Under going editing)

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DoodleKay By DoodleKay Completed

Boyxboy,ageplay with Dom/sub.

@1life1adventure hey stop being so rude who cares on how they wrote it. Nobody is perfect so there are going to be spelling mistakes. Just enjoy the book
also is he being leased or bought why doesn't he have a leash? did you mean leash?
Jojobrotato Jojobrotato Nov 02, 2016
I thought it was great but spelling and grammar is something big I noticed good over all though
also I have a question about the collar is there more than just the starter colors? is there ultra? is there premium? how do you upgrade? do you need a license to upgrade?
also that is 4 rules not 3 did you ever have a math class? and why are both but and the capitalized?
how did he speak the 1 dot parentheses did he literally say "here are the rules one dot parentheses" how does that work?