The Twelfth Order

The Twelfth Order

550 Reads 9 Votes 4 Part Story
Sarah Johnson By sarahtaylor Updated Aug 13, 2011

Twelve orders. She must do them all, correct and precise, without ruining it for herself or anyone else. No help, not at all. She can not tell anyone about that conversation she had with the stranger on the phone, it will result in death. She is trapped and can not get out, her phone is her only way of having contact with this stranger and find out who he really is, but he knows everything about Avery, even what she is doing at that certain moment.
In this mystery story you will read about the girl, Avery Knight, who had to talk to a stranger one night, and now she has to do twelve orders.

MichelleadamsRG MichelleadamsRG Aug 13, 2011
This is really good, I loved it. The storyline was so good, and all the detials put me right into the story! Keep it up!
Ebc-17 Ebc-17 Feb 18, 2011
this is really good :) please keep writing. can you read my story? 3 deadly sins? thanks love xx
Ebc-17 Ebc-17 Feb 17, 2011
omg wow! this is amazing, you need to keep writing this.. i was hooked on the whole thing! i am becoming your fan because this is so good :) keep writing hun xx
PollardWharly PollardWharly Feb 17, 2011
@sarahtaylor It's no problem. I'll fan and keep up with what's happening next :) I look forward to the next chapter
PollardWharly PollardWharly Feb 17, 2011
I loved it :) The writing is very good--specially the imagery. Very few grammer mistakes, and I was truly interested in finding out what happened next.