Horrifying New Start (Book I)

Horrifying New Start (Book I)

501K Reads 7.4K Votes 19 Part Story
M. Currie By thevelvetrose Completed

(Part of the New Beginning series.. Book 1)
A girl named Samantha was taken, along with many other girls. to a planet with aliens called Twiads. they are handsome but seem almost emotionless; and they are in desperate need of females to make their species last. But when she begins to fall for her protector, Zack, they are faced with many complications...

  • alien
  • aliens
  • earth
  • fiction
  • jack
  • kiss
  • love
  • planet
  • pregnancy
  • pregnant
  • renton
  • romance
  • run
  • sam
  • samantha
  • science
  • sciencefiction
  • taken
  • teen
  • twiad
  • zack
EvermoreQ EvermoreQ Feb 20
Weellll im not "a lot of people" soo ess-squeez me while I read and enjoy your book :)
ThatPinkPony2 ThatPinkPony2 Dec 05, 2017
The last sentence is a bit awkward. Do you think maybe you could fix it? That would be wonderful! :3
Even murder? That's all i hear on the news, the one i hear less about is traffic accidents😂
Silly_Loves_Chips Silly_Loves_Chips Jun 20, 2017
I always cry in movies. Cheesy, cliche, dumb, stupid, I always cry.
ThatPinkPony2 ThatPinkPony2 Dec 05, 2017
Not to be rude, you did ask when there was grammatical errors, but there's no period at the end of this sentence. Just wanting to tell you! :3
madisondragons madisondragons May 23, 2015
You should change up these sentences so they don't all start with she