Horrifying New Start (Book I)

Horrifying New Start (Book I)

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M. Currie By thevelvetrose Completed

(Part of the New Beginning series.. Book 1)
A girl named Samantha was taken, along with many other girls. to a planet with aliens called Twiads. they are handsome but seem almost emotionless; and they are in desperate need of females to make their species last. But when she begins to fall for her protector, Zack, they are faced with many complications...

  • alien
  • aliens
  • earth
  • fiction
  • jack
  • kiss
  • love
  • planet
  • pregnancy
  • pregnant
  • renton
  • romance
  • run
  • sam
  • samantha
  • science
  • taken
  • teen
  • twiad
  • zack
The last sentence is a bit awkward. Do you think maybe you could fix it? That would be wonderful! :3
I always cry in movies. Cheesy, cliche, dumb, stupid, I always cry.
Not to be rude, you did ask when there was grammatical errors, but there's no period at the end of this sentence. Just wanting to tell you! :3
madisondragons madisondragons May 23, 2015
You should change up these sentences so they don't all start with she
5soschurro 5soschurro May 09, 2014
That's why you don't play when hands reach up out the ground and drag you away
Robynnnx3 Robynnnx3 Mar 06, 2014
if you put - The last thing I saw of my friends was Zoey....