Horrifying New Start (Book I)

(Part of the New Beginning series.. Book 1)
A girl named Samantha was taken, along with many other girls. to a planet with aliens called Twiads. they are handsome but seem almost emotionless; and they are in desperate need of females to make their species last. But when she begins to fall for her protector, Zack, they are faced with many complications...

I always cry in movies. Cheesy, cliche, dumb, stupid, I always cry.

You should change up these sentences so they don't all start with she

That's why you don't play when hands reach up out the ground and drag you away

if you put - The last thing I saw of my friends was Zoey....

I have literally read these books three times. This was the first story I read on wattpad haha and I'm about to read it again for the 4th time.

I'm not into fantasy but I love your vampire stories so 
                              I thought I'd chance it & try.  :-)