Journey to Heaven (Unfinished)

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Jennifer By sunshining6 Updated 3 years ago
I am the soul of Myra Sivil. I am dead and alive. I was supposed to die on October 29th, 2008. But I didn't. I was saved. I was hurt in an accident, and my heart failed in the hospital. Moments before my boyfriend was going to propose. My soul was leaving my body when I died, but they saved me. It was too late. My soul was gone from my body. I was lifeless. My body was functioning, but I had no personality. A saint said that I could have seven days to look at my body on earth. I will notice the truth about my proposal. I will notice how abusive my life was. And I will notice how many people died because of me. But I only have seven days on my journey to Heaven.
Holy crap I'm so confused!!! 
                                    
                                    Confused in a good way, not like, "Oooh you stink I couldn't understand anything in your story!"
                                    
                                    More like, "Whoa!!!"
                                    
                                    I don't know how to explain it exactly, except that your story SPARKLES and for some reason I can smell Citrus as I read it...
                                    
                                    =)
                                    
                                    I think you now know that I like it.
Holy crap I'm so confused!!! 
                                    
                                    Confused in a good way, not like, "Oooh you stink I couldn't understand anything in your story!"
                                    
                                    More like, "Whoa!!!"
                                    
                                    I don't know how to explain it exactly, except that your story SPARKLES and for some reason I can smell Citrus as I read it...
                                    
                                    =)
                                    
                                    I think you now know that I like it.