Dawn of the Dead: Devils Uprise

Dawn of the Dead: Devils Uprise

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ContingencyCorp By ContingencyCorp Updated Mar 22, 2011

A group of teens, always talking about killing zombies. Well now's their chance. Zombies are beginning to take over the world, and this team of 8th graders are trying to survive. First held up at school the traveling the eastern United States in search of a plane to get them to a safe haven in California. Can they do it, or will the be eaten in the process? Every choice has a consequence in the land of the dead. Will trys all he can do to try and save his beloved Emily. Halo-crazed gamers in a Resident Evil world. 

How long would you survive???

  • apple
  • dawn
  • dead
  • death
  • devil
  • doomsayers
  • elimination
  • garden
  • invention
  • iphone
  • mall
  • movies
  • olive
  • parkour
  • powers
  • psychics
  • romance
  • sadness
  • satan
  • zombie
  • zombies
Dem-Vamp Dem-Vamp Mar 23, 2011
Okay in this PARAGRAPH NOT CHAPTER you need to indent everytime someone different is speaking. It helps the reader keep track of who's talking. And like I said before time after time.....TAKE YOUR PARAGRAPHS AND TIMES THEM BY 20!!!!! that would give you a decent chapter lol <3 still love you
Dem-Vamp Dem-Vamp Mar 23, 2011
nice way to catch the reader's attention. I know you get annoyed when I say this and I don't care if it's longer on paper, YOU NEED LONGER CHAPTERS!!!!!! Take what you think is long on your pages and times it by 20!!!