Kei and Kashi are both gay and they like eachother. When will they confess their love? How will they take it?
yaoi is boy x boy so if you don't like don't read!
I'd say straight forward but he's as curvy as a rainbow 😉
I like the book, however, to improve I would suggest you use stronger words and slow it down a bit. You have so much to say but your saying it all in one paragraph. Add detail to things and space out major events.
this has to be related to naruto somehow example: kashi for kakashi kei for keikei genkei
Thx it's my first story so it might get boring at places where I don't know what to write.
My his sounds like it could be very good. Keep going. I'm interested to see where this goes.