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Clean Slate: A Novelette

Clean Slate: A Novelette

550 Reads 53 Votes 3 Part Story
Amanda June Hagarty By AmandaJuneHagarty Completed

Something waits for him in the darkness. 

Since he woke up on a mortuary slab in Victorian London's East End, Leland has been on the run trying to stay ahead of the demon darkness, and trying to make sense of the jumble in his head.

Who is he? Why is this happening to him? How are the gaslights in the street both a modern convenience and terribly antiquated to him at the same tome? Nothing seems right, nothing fits.

Now he stands at the end of a pier in some Northwestern fishing village and there is nowhere left to run. The answers are catching up to him, but so is the darkness.

shalonsims shalonsims Jan 03, 2015
Did he dive into the water? Maybe just state that if so. Or maybe he's still on board and its just a big wave waging over the ship? Either way, maybe make it more clear
shalonsims shalonsims Jan 03, 2015
I'm a little confused what's happening here. I've read it a few times and can't really make it out. Who is on whose side? Who is talking. I'm missing something.
AmandaJuneHagarty AmandaJuneHagarty Oct 21, 2014
@BobJan70 glad you enjoyed it...thanks so Mich for letting me know!
BobJan70 BobJan70 Oct 21, 2014
Very, very interesting. You've totally caught me with this. I think you show his chaotic emotions superbly. Looking forward to the rest.
Linna1029 Linna1029 Apr 03, 2014
There's really great stuff going on here. You already have a lot of detail and great imagery, you are really capturing all of the senses nicely. 
                              
                              Really great first chapter, it grabbed me right away, made me want to keep reading.
lilstunnah lilstunnah Mar 15, 2014
just starting ready this and it caught my attention straight away! love it (: