Trapped in The Happiest Place on Earth

Trapped in The Happiest Place on Earth

34 Part Story 8.9K Reads 243 Votes
Liv By Stonehartdreamer27 Completed

The light engulfs me in itself, making me feel a burst of wind that knocks me off my feet. 
    When I open my eyes, I'm no longer standing in front of the castle. 
    I'm standing inside it.
    
    
    Rebellious teenager, Mickey Porter has spent most of her life sheltered by her parents in their own little world- that is in Disney World. After finding herself stolen away from her family, Mickey is taken on an adventure throughout the Walt Disney World Resort that will untimtatly test her strength and endurace. A possible romance? Maybe. Villains? Definitely. A happily ever after? 
    Read and find out.

@vitamin_water  Okay I see what your saying. Thanks for taking the time to read it this far though! Your opinion realy does mean a lot to me, as does any other reader's thoughts.  And trust me, when I finish this thing I cannot wait to go back to revise and edit! It's killing me!
I like how you keep emphasizing Micky's opinions about Disney. Repeating it so that the reader can't forget no matter what. But with how much you repeat it, I keep thinking that there will be something having to do with Disney that will really upset her soon. Voted.
Ditzy00 Ditzy00 May 26, 2012 04:35AM
This is super good! Haha! It's really kind of creepy too......
locosgatos2 locosgatos2 May 22, 2012 02:07AM
Omala I am going to hit myself for not reading this earlier. I jut kept forgetting abou it! I mean I know it's awesome cause you wrote it, but this is amazing!!! I hv to read more! Especially since chapter three is romance, and we both know I'm a sucker for romance!! :D