The Masters

The Masters

2.4K Reads 72 Votes 15 Part Story
thestoryofmylife1 By thestoryofmylife1 Updated Mar 30, 2013

Carmendale is a small town so by definition it should be boring and drama-free, but Turner Platt and The Masters have managed to entertain themselves.  And with Jeffery Price's induction into The Masters, his best friend, Catherine West is brought into a new world, a world of deceit and secrets.

thestoryofmylife1 thestoryofmylife1 Dec 15, 2012
@RitaMB I go into who The Masters are in the next chapter.  And thanks for catching that error!
RitaMB RitaMB Dec 11, 2012
the synopsis is nice and concise but I'd just expand it a little more to say who the masters are. I'd put 'doing' at the end of the first sentence to complete it. It's a really good introduction which gives just enough background before the characters start speaking, well done.
louloufritz louloufritz Dec 10, 2012
I really like years later stories. I am actually writing one right now. Jumping right in! Awesome !
SincerelyJune SincerelyJune Dec 09, 2012
Ten years is a long time for someone not to visit their parents. The ending hooked me in the most.
thestoryofmylife1 thestoryofmylife1 Oct 07, 2012
@AlysArden thanks so much!  I hope you like the story!  And thanks for the vote <3