The Masters

The Masters

15 Part Story 2.4K Reads 72 Votes
thestoryofmylife1 By thestoryofmylife1 Updated Mar 30, 2013

Carmendale is a small town so by definition it should be boring and drama-free, but Turner Platt and The Masters have managed to entertain themselves.  And with Jeffery Price's induction into The Masters, his best friend, Catherine West is brought into a new world, a world of deceit and secrets.

@RitaMB I go into who The Masters are in the next chapter.  And thanks for catching that error!
RitaMB RitaMB Dec 11, 2012 09:37AM
the synopsis is nice and concise but I'd just expand it a little more to say who the masters are. I'd put 'doing' at the end of the first sentence to complete it. It's a really good introduction which gives just enough background before the characters start speaking, well done.
louloufritz louloufritz Dec 10, 2012 01:29AM
I really like years later stories. I am actually writing one right now. Jumping right in! Awesome !
SincerelyJune SincerelyJune Dec 09, 2012 11:24PM
Ten years is a long time for someone not to visit their parents. The ending hooked me in the most.
@AlysArden thanks so much!  I hope you like the story!  And thanks for the vote <3