The Celebrity Bodyguard #Wattys2016

The Celebrity Bodyguard #Wattys2016

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SweetAngelx By SweetAngelx Updated Oct 07

CURRENTLY #16 on General Fiction 13.July.16
  
  "Love makes you do stupid things."
  
  Hannah becomes a personal bodyguard for a well-known actor. She has to swallow her own fear and pride in order to protect her new employer. 
  
  But little does she know that her fear will be back to haunt her. Meanwhile, her best friend will do anything to protect her.
  
  This story will transport you to the world of celebrities. Hannah, the first female Hollywood bodyguard will give you her insights about guarding the world-wide famous superstar, Robert Hugh Patrick. Meanwhile, you'll also get a chance to experience the life of a celebrity through Robert's view;   what's it's like behind sets, being stalked by numerous hectic fans - while having a female bodyguard. 
  
  'The Celebrity Bodyguard' will make you laugh, shout, curse and perhaps cry at a certain point. The story is a mixture of humor and romance with a little drop of both mystery and revenge.
  
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  Credit goes to (Thanks y'all)
  @lovebooksmusiclife92 for this beautiful and catchy summary
  
  @kandyjonesxx for the amazing cover.
  
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I think you should convert this prologue into a regular ch. Cause I didn't find it relevant to the main theme. The ch was rather nice and funny. About her dreaming about alex. But I don't get what it has to do with the main theme. Who is Alex.
Well that's a funny (and a tad bit awkward) way of saying she has hazel eyes...
 #Ethereal
                              
                              That was an amazing beginning. It was so sweet when they shared their feelings for each other....but then she woke up...?! 😱😱 Lol. That was an intense dream, though😂 I see no errors whatsoever. If I missed any, then I was too engrossed in the story to even notice 👌😄
 #etheral 
                              
                              Wow! Nice start! This prologue was an enjoyable read. Your writing style is absolutely beautiful, and I think that your writing is very detailed. The characterization is strong and I loved the way it ended! Keep writing! :)
The prologue is well written, definitely a great starting point
MariaBlisse MariaBlisse Sep 19
 #ethereal
                              
                              to be very honest, this whole 'it was all a dream' is really a let down. you create a certain story and gear it up to something and then just say 'it was a dream! ha!'. Not only does it not progress the story but it made me instantly disappointed and almost felt cheated.