N.O.W

N.O.W

177 Reads 13 Votes 6 Part Story
Skybumblers2187 By Skybumblers2187 Updated Dec 22, 2017

Sebastian, a 16 year old boy, lives, trains, and survives in an organisation. After an accident revolving Sebastian's parents death, he grows up with his Aunt, in an organisation called New Ordered Word, or NOW. After the tables turn, Sebastian finds out a secret. A secret know one wants anybody to know. 
Will Sebastian survive? 
Through a journey, of pain, loss and regret, Sebastian learns the real meaning of pain.
Come along on an adventure with Sebastian and his friends and find out the real meaning of sacrifice.

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Also just saying, as you know, a writer! YAY! 
I will be updating on Fridays. Just so ya know...
Anyway, I hope, people who are reading my story, that you enjoy it!

  • continuing
  • eventually
  • late
  • lifechanging
  • lifeordeath
  • mystery
  • orginalcharacter
  • original
  • pineapple
  • revenge
  • slowupdates
  • sorrynotsorry
  • war
demi_woo123 demi_woo123 Nov 11, 2017
THIS IS AWESOME!!!! but a few tips: i know you try to make paragraphs which is good but like when you are done with one paragraph, press enter so that there are gaps between the paragraphs to give room for inline comments. :)
demi_woo123 demi_woo123 Nov 11, 2017
ok, i must say that...
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              I don't know what you see in me because you are a waaaaaaaay better writer than me!!
0_luxuria_2 0_luxuria_2 Nov 11, 2017
O MY LORD! THE DETAILS! I FEEL LIKE I'M LITERALLY THERE JUST STANDING WITNESSING THE WHOLE THING! You are seriously talented! Teach me?