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My little mate

My little mate

110K Reads 2.8K Votes 29 Part Story
Hahaha! By sweettopaz Updated Apr 18, 2016

(((TERRIBLE SPELLING AND GRAMMAR!!!!!READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!!! I have some chapters of the updated version with better spelling and grammar.)))
'I'm not little! I may be short but I'm not little! Okay maybe I'm little to him. My alpha mate. Yeah I know alpha!
Rawr. Ima werewolf. Rawr. ' 
Wow I just realized what goes on in my head. I'm Sam by the way. Samantha but I prefer Sam. I'm 16 and I'm kinda a werewolf. I know right awesome! 

This is Sam. What will happen when her childish character means the possessive alpha? What will happen when things turn south?

KylieHannah KylieHannah Aug 02, 2016
Capital U - beginning of every sentence should be capitalized
                              Question mark after 'doing' - always use punctuations
                              Capital 'She' and comma after 'said' and period finishing it off.
Living_Hope Living_Hope Apr 18, 2016
Dude, ok this is a really big coincidence. So me and my best friend call each other names that we wish we had. Like she calls me Sam, even though that's not my real name. And guys..... HER LAST NAME'S CONRAD!!! FÛCK YEAH!!! I SAID IT!!!
jay_dorky jay_dorky Jul 26, 2016
I tried to read it but the first couple errors in the first chapters and now these, I just can't
KylieHannah KylieHannah Aug 02, 2016
Alright. From the summary I like the idea of the story. So from now on, when I remember, I'm going to comment on spelling and grammar mistakes. I'm not trying to be rude or a bitch, but everyone should know when they've made a mistake so try can fix it.
PanicAtTheRealness PanicAtTheRealness Oct 05, 2016
Hey I think it's a really good book but the grammar is making it really hard to understand what the he'll is going  on. ...
oneail52810 oneail52810 May 28, 2016
I don't rlly understand what they were saying bout mate to mate and stuff. The diaouge was very confusing