Devoured Destiny (Completed, but being rewritten and edited.)

Devoured Destiny (Completed, but being rewritten and edited.)

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Chae Winacott By ChaeWinacott Completed

He's one pissed off creature. 
"What did you do that for?! I could have died! YOUR NUTS!"
 "But unfortunately, you are not dead. Why is that; my little gem?...You look like a human, and you smell like a human..." He brings his nose right up to my ear. My hairs are up on end, sending unwanted shivers throughout my body. 

"And you certainly feel like a human girl..." Jones trails off while he torments me by caressing the side of my cheek with his long finger. 

The only thing I can do is remain still. 

The boy on the Willow had warned me not to take off without him. I should have listened. Curiosity. What a bitch. 
A story of stubborn love, reincarnation, and unseen majestical lands - OH, and vampires. Ariel is a teenage girl, who is always over analyzing life. She is told that she is part of a different species of vampires. She finds herself quickly questioning her sanity quite often after she is brought into this unknown land, meets two mysterious, handsome men - and is told that she and one of them - are the key to saving thousands of souls. 
  She finds herself giving in, and she starts her journey. What she doesn't realize is that, this is not the first time she has begun this journey; 
  Nor is it the second.

A love triangle like no other - and an insane new world, with past lives that she cannot recall continuously flashing through her mind - follow Ariel on her journey to discovery.

Forsaken_Angels Forsaken_Angels Aug 21, 2014
It should have a question mark after mind since it seems to be as if she's asking a question to herself.
ChaeWinacott ChaeWinacott Mar 31, 2014
really? That's awesome! I have read it so many times, but it's mine so that's a little different. lol So glad you like it! Have you started the sequel?
ChaeWinacott ChaeWinacott Apr 26, 2013
@RosaButton All characters are pretty much stuck looking like they are 18-21 years of age. I refer to Neven as a 'boy' in the begining chapter because to Ariel - he is a boy. She doesn'ty know him yet, and doesn't really see him as a man until a little further on. Sorry for any confusion!
ChaeWinacott ChaeWinacott Apr 23, 2013
@yessi_luv_you ....?@leon12123 :) @Momina19 what blurb? the copyright?
ChaeWinacott ChaeWinacott Feb 24, 2013
@SupPrincess your def. not the only person! :) hope you enjoy my story!
ChaeWinacott ChaeWinacott Oct 27, 2012
@Tribble Thanks. I have revised all of what you just mentioned in my manuscript. I just haven't changed it on here. But thank you for the help, and I appreciate you opinion.