Don't fall in love...it only hurts when you fall.
@Nadie_Rae Thank you! I'm really glad that you liked it :) I'll try to go back and fix those mistakes soon too! I'm glad you enjoyed that too :)
@DianaPena Thank you so much too! I'm so glad you're happy with my story :)
@DianaPena thanks! I know most writers don't do this and many people don't like/read the character list but I figured why not put it up there for anyone who does. :) glad you liked the idea :)
@FlowerofHope thank you!! :) I am changing some of the later chapters though, so you may want to check that out later
Its really good *VOTED*
I think this is really good. I love the mysterious tone you've set up. Good job~
I noticed some grammar prombelms. I liked the topic but reemmber to actully go over and say to yourself is this right should i chance something. K? Thats all. Got my vote. :)