Tomboy Meets Tommy ( Under 🚧)

Tomboy Meets Tommy ( Under 🚧)

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Koko Luscious By jellogirl Updated Nov 30, 2016

He was never right for you anyway. 

He wasn't?...
    
  He knew she was dying. 
  They all knew but neglected to tell you!
    
"Charlie, I--I didn--" Tommy began. My eyes were tired from crying. I sniffled.
  
 "--Save it." I truly hated the fact that I still felt like I was in love with him. 
    
   Why? 
    
Was it because he told me his secrets? Because he made me laugh? Because he comforted me when I needed it?
  
I walked away. I ran as far as I could. I needed to get out of there.
    
I heard fast paced foot steps from behind me. A black van was parked ahead, the side door opened. 
    
  Charlie, I've got a bad feeling about this... 
    
Me too. 

"CHARLIE!"
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© All Rights Reserved. 
December, 2010. 
Written by Konita Sasraku • Jellogirl. 

•Please do not copy as this is an original. Thank you•

  • adventure
  • charlie
  • charlotte
  • cookies
  • creeper
  • danger
  • grandma
  • love
  • romance
  • skating
  • tomboy
  • tommy
  • weirdos
  • wrestling
abymae abymae Jan 18, 2015
@abymae @jellogirl there is always value to editing. there is also value to researching. both enhance storytelling. but don't allow either to overrun the story.
onevoice onevoice Dec 13, 2012
I really  like this story! You developed the characters really well! Its not everyday that you see a fun 40 year old grandmother! 
                              Haha how hold was chars mom when she had her tho! Haha looking forward to reading more
jellogirl jellogirl Feb 14, 2011
Thank u thank u thank u than u! U r my first comment!! Ahhhhhhhhhhhh :) ahah I'm just one year older than u. I promise to read ur story, but I have to get to bed now. So ill read in the morn!!@LonelyInACrowd thank