Moonlight Lies

Moonlight Lies

854 Reads 15 Votes 5 Part Story
Rose By ifroseswereblue Updated Apr 02, 2011

Cadence never thought moving back to her hometown would be easy but what begins to happen is nothing of what she expected. Whose the new family that moved in? What are their secrets? And why is she so attracted to the their oldest son? However, more importantly who's committing all the murders and why have they suddenly set their sights upon Cadence? A race against time to find out who the murderer is before she's killed Cadence might find out some things she never wanted to know were real.

JMason0206 JMason0206 Mar 08, 2011
This is great - details draw you in to the specifics of the story.  :D Can't wait to read on.  Voting right now!
tianajade tianajade Feb 14, 2011
A good start! It draws the reader in almost instantly! I like the use of some of your descriptions. Although it's very short, it's pact full of intenseness and mystery! It definitely leaves the reader wanting more. Great beginning! (:Keep writing!
Katluver2121 Katluver2121 Feb 14, 2011
I LOVE IT!!!! the detail is amazing! I wish I could write that well on my stories! Please post more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-D