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Space War. The First War

Space War. The First War

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LordReaper By LordReaper Updated Jun 19, 2014

After being kidnapped by the Government, Nicolas Vega is forced to endure the vigorous training of the secret Super Soldier program. Just as Nicolas graduates at the top of the class, His home is invaded by the mysterious race known as the Margins.  Follow Nicolas in an epic adventure full of betrayals, hardships, difficult situations and hard choices.  Can Nicolas keep it together? Or will he break and let his home be conquered? Will he rally his friends to save his home? Or will he give up?  Read and find out!

uzair1 uzair1 Oct 02, 2016
This is a dope book. The intro is really interesting. I also like the names. I'm new to Wattpad, so it'd be great if you checked my work. :)
scuddly scuddly Mar 11, 2016
Suppiciously  starts out like enders game....nothing wrong with that I guess but.....
SirGuyOfGisborne SirGuyOfGisborne Feb 20, 2014
Great start and smart move on the kid's part. I was called "braniac" when I was a kid.
LordReaper LordReaper Feb 18, 2014
Just posted another chapter and fixed the battle/war mistake :)
EllieMarieAnderson EllieMarieAnderson Feb 18, 2014
Interesting so far!  This kid's really witty!  One TINY suggestion: you should switch the words "Battle" and "War," because if you win the battle first, then you win the war :)