Don't Leave Me

Don't Leave Me

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allergic_to_bs By allergic_to_bs Updated Feb 22

Audrey and Matt have been dating for almost two years.  Everybody envies their relationship as they have been together a really long time; since their Freshman year of high school.. now they're Juniors.  The adorable teen couple has finally decided to have sex for the first time on their second anniversary.  Something comes about that will change their lives forever.  Will Matt stay for Audrey?  Or will she be begging -  "Don't Leave Me!" ?

LoveThirsty LoveThirsty Mar 07, 2015
I really like the start so far..but i feel like everything is going so so fast..the dialouges and settings need to be slowed down and definitely described more...
                              
                              I felt like i was running trynna keep up..
                              
                              Wish you all the best
goalssss goalssss Dec 01, 2014
is it possible that you could include a description of both of them in the book? i needddddd to know who im visualising. sounds weird but mehhhhhh