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Photogenic (BoyxBoy)

Photogenic (BoyxBoy)

62.4K Reads 3.7K Votes 41 Part Story
Ariel By AmorphousAriel Completed

WARNING: Needs Heavy Editing!

Walter lives a cliche life. Being outcasted for being gay, being bullied by the biggest homophobes in school, and yep you guess it, having a crush on his bully Gale Walkins. 

The only different is he has a camera, and it's what happens behind the camera that counts.

Aw, this was so cool! I loved how you incorporated homophobes, since no one ever does that for some reason. Some description would be nice. The characters, the settings. It's a nice insight into what your character thinks is important. Anyways, this is really good!
myfrenulum myfrenulum Apr 03
This is a really nice start to the story. There's enough character development that I want to go to the next chapter. Something that would have been helpful: some physical descriptions of the characters. Maybe in the next chapter.
This was a great way to start off the story. I'm really into it so far. I can see a lot of room for character development in the future and I'm excited!!!
I think you meant coach. Couch is the thing you sit on and they can't kick you off of a basketball team
will_hushy will_hushy 3 days ago
I love how the main character's in constant denial of liking the people who make his life miserable. I also like your writing style because it incorporates thought, action and description really well. Quite excited to see assholes soften up. The end line was strong too :)
Gale is so unnecessary. What's the point of wiping your hands on your shorts! 😂😑