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Photogenic (BoyxBoy)

Photogenic (BoyxBoy)

68.5K Reads 4.1K Votes 41 Part Story
Ariel By AmorphousAriel Completed

WARNING: Needs Heavy Editing!

Walter lives a cliche life. Being outcasted for being gay, being bullied by the biggest homophobes in school, and yep you guess it, having a crush on his bully Gale Walkins. 

The only different is he has a camera, and it's what happens behind the camera that counts.

Aw, this was so cool! I loved how you incorporated homophobes, since no one ever does that for some reason. Some description would be nice. The characters, the settings. It's a nice insight into what your character thinks is important. Anyways, this is really good!
With the way the deal sounds, it sounds like the devil just sold his soul to you
myfrenulum myfrenulum Apr 03
This is a really nice start to the story. There's enough character development that I want to go to the next chapter. Something that would have been helpful: some physical descriptions of the characters. Maybe in the next chapter.
This was a great way to start off the story. I'm really into it so far. I can see a lot of room for character development in the future and I'm excited!!!
I think you meant coach. Couch is the thing you sit on and they can't kick you off of a basketball team
will_hushy will_hushy Apr 23
I love how the main character's in constant denial of liking the people who make his life miserable. I also like your writing style because it incorporates thought, action and description really well. Quite excited to see assholes soften up. The end line was strong too :)