Reunited

Reunited

250 Reads 22 Votes 3 Part Story
Jess By MyMoodIsPink Updated Jun 03, 2012

Nothing is more painful than having your only child disappear. Michael Hanes knows just that pain. When his three year old daughter, Erin, goes missing from her birthday party, he falls into a deep depression. Years after her disappearance, he finally decides to do something with his life. His only goal becomes to help others avoid this pain at all cost. Things become dicey when he is contacted by Claire Kilbourn, the mother of a missing six year old. She takes Michael on a ride that he will never forget. (Description will be edited. This is just a filler.)

StayingMe StayingMe Jun 04, 2012
i love your writing. That was such a tragic. I can't imagine how he must feel right now.
sophiabelle sophiabelle Jun 03, 2012
This is amazing, so far, the best I've read. I had to admit the beginning was a bit tedious but then when Erin went missing, I just couldn't stop reading. Good job, I'm definitely adding this to my library (:
MyMoodIsPink MyMoodIsPink May 07, 2012
@Loserstalker Purely coincidental, and thanks for the review.
Loserstalker Loserstalker May 07, 2012
i saw this tv show wherein it the event on the party was similiar to this one but the scenes in here are more intense. where might erin be :(( reading on to find out!
MyMoodIsPink MyMoodIsPink May 01, 2012
@cat78956 Thanks for the info. I haven't spent too much time with little kids in a while, so it was just a guess.
cat78956 cat78956 May 01, 2012
I like it so far. The dramatic twist when Erin was gone was really sad. The only thing I would say is inaccurate is how little Erin can speak at age three.  I babysit a two year old that has a larger vocabulary then that.