How could i be so stupid? We were so happy, and now it's all gone, all over something that was Just a kiss
<3. I liked it. Although Im sorta sick of 1D famous fics but I will always have time for some Ziall (my OTP). This was fairly well written and I like the plot so far so VOTED :D.
So after reading this part i didnt know who the fanfiction was about so i just googled the name. dont know much about one direction but cool so far.
Loved it cant wait 4 the next chapter. Hope it come soon.
So Sweet ♥
@Duckwinpie Niall's sat close to Louis, and where i'm from if someone's sat really close to eac other it's called sat in each others laps
You never mention that Niall was sitting on Louis's lap so get a bit confused there. Other than that, it was really good :)