Night, Forgotten

Night, Forgotten

22.1K Reads 1.3K Votes 27 Part Story
Emily Lindin By emilylindin Updated Jan 22

A desperate new mother must piece together her memories from the most violent night of her life - and confront the truth about the ghosts that have been haunting her ever since.

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Wow, I wonder why he's angry. Maybe he's jealous of the child because his partner almost died giving birth to her? Maybe it's not his child, or he thinks it isn't his even though it is? Hmmm...
Oh my gosh, I think I might've just made a connection — near-death experience, ends in pregnancy — I wonder if she was raped??? If so, that's so horrible :(
Aww, poor baby! I was a premie, too, born two months early (36 weeks, I think?) and only three pounds seven ounces. I had to be in the ICU for a month before my parents were allowed to take me home.
Man, now I really want to hear THIS story! It's not every day a near-death experience ends in pregnancy
LondonKline LondonKline Nov 23
I disagree with JasperRuby. I think this is a perfect way to end the chapter. It’s a great twist. I’m invested now and want to know more.
emilylindin emilylindin Nov 09
Amazing. Thank you — this is EXACTLY the kind of feedback I need now, as I’m making another round of edits!