Revenge of the Fallen (Completed)

Revenge of the Fallen (Completed)

63.2K Reads 1.6K Votes 22 Part Story
Neya By lulladay Updated Dec 27, 2016

former: Revenge of the Dark Elemental Dragon Slayer
  Having a hatred heart is worse. But what could be worser?
  
  [revising 1/18]
  February 16, 2014 - August 14, 2015
  Unedited so expect lame way of writing and is made during newbie days. Chapter 1 revised.

Factor11 Factor11 Feb 24
Lemonade Lucy???
                              No, you must only drink strawberry milkshake 
                              (Shoves container of strawberry milkshake down her throat)
                              That's better
Alright alright i see you 
                              my dawg using the name from transformers
                              Ok 😎
Nobody9143 Nobody9143 Jul 17, 2016
WEAKLING DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH SHE HAS GONE THREW MENTALLY AND HOW MANY TIMES SHE HAS BEEN BETEN AND TORCHERED   AND STILL SHOWS UP EVERYDAY AND SMILES AND CHEERS YOU UP EVEN IF SHES SAD
Sucy27 Sucy27 Dec 29, 2016
Wait, the maximum is five?? Then why are you kicking her out if with Lisanna it will be a five man team. It will be Lucy, Gray, Erza, Lisanna and then you so that makes five, yet you're kicking her out of the team. Wow, you are way much more of an idiot than I thought.
Kimikozumi Kimikozumi Dec 15, 2015
I'm loving the correct use of grammar in this story so far. Most of the other Fairy Tail fan fiction stories I've looked into have had the most horrific layout. This is like finding a secret treasure.
-BioCorn- -BioCorn- Oct 03, 2015
Lmao because shapeshifting is more powerful than Celestial Cosmic magic shiz