The Bad Boy and Me

The Bad Boy and Me

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Dark0Princess By Dark0Princess Updated Jun 25, 2013

It all started one night while I was waiting for the bus to come, the night I met the dark, menacing, down right mean Sergio Wilas. The night I, Cairra Murrey would remember for the rest of my life.

Dark0Princess Dark0Princess Jun 25, 2013
@BeauQueen Thank you! I really like the cover, if only I could find the person who made it for me.
BeauQueen BeauQueen Jun 25, 2013
This is so cool! Love the humor and the cover, good dialogue and flow too :)
Hidden_shadows98 Hidden_shadows98 Jun 23, 2013
I love how tough she acted yet still had the thoughts of a 'nerd'
Dark0Princess Dark0Princess Mar 15, 2013
@Asiya323 Thank you so much! May Allah reward you for taking the time and actually reading this!
AshleyM101 AshleyM101 Feb 12, 2013
Great story so far! I hate being slashed while waiting at the bus stop. It's like "Im standing in the rain and you are dry in your car and you cant possibly go around?"
swtlovekiss swtlovekiss Feb 12, 2013
It's a good plot. But watch out because you keep jumping tenses. There were quite a few grammar mistakes. It became choppy to me and was hard to follow. Other than that good job