The Bad Boy and Me

The Bad Boy and Me

5 Part Story 7.2K Reads 184 Votes
Dark0Princess By Dark0Princess Updated Jun 25, 2013

It all started one night while I was waiting for the bus to come, the night I met the dark, menacing, down right mean Sergio Wilas. The night I, Cairra Murrey would remember for the rest of my life.

Dark0Princess Dark0Princess Jun 25, 2013 10:34PM
@BeauQueen Thank you! I really like the cover, if only I could find the person who made it for me.
BeauQueen BeauQueen Jun 25, 2013 10:18PM
This is so cool! Love the humor and the cover, good dialogue and flow too :)
I love how tough she acted yet still had the thoughts of a 'nerd'
Dark0Princess Dark0Princess Mar 15, 2013 05:23PM
@Asiya323 Thank you so much! May Allah reward you for taking the time and actually reading this!
AshleyM101 AshleyM101 Feb 12, 2013 06:55PM
Great story so far! I hate being slashed while waiting at the bus stop. It's like "Im standing in the rain and you are dry in your car and you cant possibly go around?"
swtlovekiss swtlovekiss Feb 12, 2013 06:46PM
It's a good plot. But watch out because you keep jumping tenses. There were quite a few grammar mistakes. It became choppy to me and was hard to follow. Other than that good job