It all started one night while I was waiting for the bus to come, the night I met the dark, menacing, down right mean Sergio Wilas. The night I, Cairra Murrey would remember for the rest of my life.
@BeauQueen Thank you! I really like the cover, if only I could find the person who made it for me.
This is so cool! Love the humor and the cover, good dialogue and flow too :)
I love how tough she acted yet still had the thoughts of a 'nerd'
@Asiya323 Thank you so much! May Allah reward you for taking the time and actually reading this!
Great story so far! I hate being slashed while waiting at the bus stop. It's like "Im standing in the rain and you are dry in your car and you cant possibly go around?"
It's a good plot. But watch out because you keep jumping tenses. There were quite a few grammar mistakes. It became choppy to me and was hard to follow. Other than that good job