Because it was always you

Because it was always you

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Rose By ifroseswereblue Updated Mar 16, 2011

Devon didn't think another year in his high class boarding school would be different than any other year. But boy was he wrong because this year he meets Ezekiel. Ezekiel doesn't want to be noticed, doesn't want to make attachments but he hadn't counted on Devon getting so close. When Devon learns his secret Zeke has to do everything in his power to keep him safe...but can he?

  • boys
  • hurt
  • lies
  • love
  • secrets
preserum preserum Apr 23, 2011
If my god. You've just taken my two most favorite and hottest men out there and mashed them into story.
                              
                              I think I love you.
SeleneFD SeleneFD Mar 10, 2011
Your poem was so moving, so keep at it!  Might I suggest participating in National Poetry Month?  It's next month and if you don't already know you pen a poem daily.  It really improves your writing.  Keep up with the good work, you've got something great here! *Voted*
ifroseswereblue ifroseswereblue Mar 09, 2011
@emilyrb ^ ^ I'd love to. it'd be an honor really. and yes i wrote that poem its one of my better ones. i'm awful at poetry lol. thank you so much, its really a spirit lifter to hear you say that
tianajade tianajade Mar 07, 2011
I agree with the comments below, I loved the poem at the beginning. It starts off your story really well. There are a few things, such as grammar, punctuation and your paragraphs that can use more improvement, but I think your story sounds really interesting (: Overall, a good job! Keep writing!
Clover Clover Feb 13, 2011
It's good! I liked it very much!!! :D I will comment and fan x]!!!
                              Keep updating :DDD