When destiny calls

When destiny calls

416 Reads 18 Votes 1 Part Story
Lauren By chibi_wolf Completed

I've had an enormous crush on him for a while now. Braiden is his name. The vain of my life, the one who i think about the most and the one who i know will never be worthy of his attention.

chibi_wolf chibi_wolf Sep 01, 2011
@phantomknight I tried to concentrate on making the story link with destiny and flow like music x3 I hope I done it well xDD
phantomknight phantomknight Aug 31, 2011
Awww. That was so sweet. So it is really destiny. And I love music just like Alexis. *voted*
chibi_wolf chibi_wolf Aug 31, 2011
@destinyrhymes Fair enough :) thank you for leaving a comment :) I'm glad that you read it ^_^ I will remember your feedback for my other stories :)
destinyrhymes destinyrhymes Aug 31, 2011
I forgot to comment on this one :P yeah i like your story and the way you write but i'd really prefer if you wrote in short sentences and paragraph instead of ... well some of them are long and I get lost between the lines :P 
                              
                              but it's actually good
chibi_wolf chibi_wolf Aug 14, 2011
@MissAmyMae really??? thanks a lot! ^_^ I'm glad you like it ;)
firecracker321 firecracker321 Jul 26, 2011
wow this is really good I like how you have shown the chahracters emotions and how you have shown her passion for music. I like you style of writing it's really good keep up the good work! :)