This sonnet was written to express my emotion towards a failed marriage the ugliness of its embodiment personified.
I'm not at all surprised that it took months to polish this masterpiece - very original and cleverly composed. Vtd
This has your characteristic meaty lines in it, well said again. It leaves me thinking about what happens next.
Excellent sonnet, Olan. Emotive write with wonderful sound throughout. vtd.
@VincentMooreThank you Vincent for reading this poem and your high praise. Take care. I am recovering from neuro surgery that occurred on Monday. Nothing serious but I had a generator replaced in my chest to help control my seizures. I will try to get around more to read as I heal LPF, Olan.
This was inspiring, I almost gave up hope on wattpad as far as a place to find new and fresh poetry all it took was a search for styles and froms of poetry instead of wadding through the what's hot list... Ill be reading more.
@MyLastBreathe Thank you for read my sonnet, MLB. I will return the favor soon. Olan.