Hauntings of the past...

Hauntings of the past...

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Fire_flower By Fire_flower_97 Updated Feb 12, 2011

Leah Wood grew up on a dangerous estate. She escaped from the horrors of where she lived with her parents to a quiet friendly neighbourhood when she was fourteen. At least she thought she had. Its been fourteen years since her best friend disappeared. Her life is good, she has just become Detective Inspector Wood however she soon realises that no matter how far she runs or where she hides the past will always come back to haunt her...

stephlouise2k9 stephlouise2k9 May 23, 2011
Hey this is a really good start, the plot sound's really interesting! :)
- - Mar 22, 2011
I agree with trishthewriter you do need to work on your grammar and spelling. But it does have promise. I would just work on it if I were you. Hope that helped.
143Tobi 143Tobi Feb 21, 2011
This isn't normally the kind of book I'm likely to pick up, but I"m willing to give it a a shot. You have a good concept here! There are from grammar errors here are there though. Voted.
Bwriter Bwriter Feb 21, 2011
There are some grammatical errors here and there, reread through your story multiple times make the necessary corrections. other than that you seem to be on the right track, voted.