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The Day I Turned

The Day I Turned

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Claire A By DarkShadowsAng Updated Dec 03, 2012

A girl that goes to the doctors and then after finds a stranger in an alley way ........

DarkShadowsAng DarkShadowsAng Jul 22, 2011
@Reality_Collides thanks for that, I will do that when I am bored hehe :)
Reality_Collides Reality_Collides Jul 21, 2011
You've got a decent plot line going on I just think if you read it out loud it would be easy for you to be able to spot where things can be changed, with a bit of work it could be a good start =]