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Tracy M Joyce By TracyMJoyce Completed

"Look at her - she's Hill Clan.  Even the Matyrani don't like them..."
  Isaura - little is known about her race, but much is whispered.  Born to refugees, she grows up enduring racism and superstition within a community that fears her.  She has few friends, and those she treasures.  Trapped, she longs for escape to a different life. 
  Escape is only the beginning of her troubles.  Having fled an invading army with her friends, Isaura is faced with heinous choices in order to survive.  Secrets from her past emerge to torment her and threaten to destroy all she holds dear.  Her struggles forge a bond with an ancient power - a power which may transform or consume her.  Old hatreds and superstitions are renewed and at her most vulnerable she learns the true nature of those around her.
  Her only hope lies in a foreign land - a land rich in tradition; ruled by three powerful clans.  A land with a history marked by warfare; where magic as we know it does not exist.  Instead what is here, in abundance, is a more primal power.
  Survival carries a high price.
  Welcome to Altaica.
  **This sample of the full novel. Approx the first 1/3 of the novel is posted on Wattpad for your enjoyment.

This chapter is very well written. I am looking forward to reading the second chapter!
AmieMaria6 AmieMaria6 Jun 20, 2016
I stop at this one first .I'll be back soon to this story.  So far it were good
MakaTrish MakaTrish May 12, 2016
I must say, the word play is really good, it has captivated me. i will definitely continue reading.
ChristopherArmstron8 ChristopherArmstron8 Nov 09, 2015
I really liked this chapter. The descriptions were wonderful and the language made us feel just how bad the situation was.
EmileaJones EmileaJones Aug 21, 2015
Not only is the writing superb, its fresh and that's hard to find in fantasy. Also, going to make a Google+ group because I'm a copy cat and that's a great idea to discuss story ideas! Bravo. Onto the next chapter!
BakerAiree BakerAiree Jul 06, 2015
I really liked it! I really like the struggle between her and her father. How stubborn they both are but her deceased mother always at the back of her mind to keep her father safe. Very well written! Keep going :)