Homeland

Homeland

4.7K Reads 103 Votes 15 Part Story
Diamondsinthegrass By Diamondsinthegrass Updated Feb 18, 2012

Seven hundred years ago, after a long campain to overthrown the supressive government, Alina Sempre got kicked out of Hell.  But now war is upon them, and they want her back.  It is the simplest of questions:  does she return?

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OH_HOT_DAMN OH_HOT_DAMN Feb 19, 2012
The names are very, very, strange. And you made a couple of spelling mistakes here and there but nothing you can't fix.(:
                              
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- - Nov 30, 2011
It's fantastic! You may want to consider using other symbols than fullstops only, but I like it very much!
help-me-think-of-one help-me-think-of-one Jul 05, 2011
I love how you use tabs. Almost nobody on Wattpad uses tabs, and I thought it was different. :)
                              The way you're writing this is so interesting. I like how it's in the form of letters rather than an actual story. It makes the entire thing so much more interesting. :P
Diamondsinthegrass Diamondsinthegrass May 09, 2011
Heehee.  Yeah... The names are hard to pronounce, but I wanted it sort of weird/exotic.  You can just call the girl Alina.  Citudaolle is see-too-da-ol.  That looks really weird.  Khlamuherguetora is cla-mu-hare-gue-tor-a.
Amelia_Young Amelia_Young Feb 28, 2011
You asked me to read this and wow this is really different!!!
                              I need more letters because the way this is going is really intersting :)
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green-tea green-tea Feb 27, 2011
Love love the ending. Keep updating! (even though I'm not). Lol