Seven hundred years ago, after a long campain to overthrown the supressive government, Alina Sempre got kicked out of Hell. But now war is upon them, and they want her back. It is the simplest of questions: does she return?
The names are very, very, strange. And you made a couple of spelling mistakes here and there but nothing you can't fix.(:
It's fantastic! You may want to consider using other symbols than fullstops only, but I like it very much!
I love how you use tabs. Almost nobody on Wattpad uses tabs, and I thought it was different. :)
The way you're writing this is so interesting. I like how it's in the form of letters rather than an actual story. It makes the entire thing so much more interesting. :P
Heehee. Yeah... The names are hard to pronounce, but I wanted it sort of weird/exotic. You can just call the girl Alina. Citudaolle is see-too-da-ol. That looks really weird. Khlamuherguetora is cla-mu-hare-gue-tor-a.
You asked me to read this and wow this is really different!!!
I need more letters because the way this is going is really intersting :)
Love love the ending. Keep updating! (even though I'm not). Lol