Abigail (Criminal Minds)

3 Part Story 581 Reads 9 Votes
Maddey By going_rouge Updated 3 years ago

    
                    
    
                    
Abby is an idiot. Just saying.  Anyway, much better chapter!  There were a few puncuation/capitalization errors, easily fixable.  In the third paragraph you had a bit of a run on sentence going there.  Other than that, I like this one! Descriptions were adept, flow easily fixable but still well done. Voted!
Abby is an idiot. Just saying.  Anyway, much better chapter!  There were a few puncuation/capitalization errors, easily fixable.  In the third paragraph you had a bit of a run on sentence going there.  Other than that, I like this one! Descriptions were adept, flow easily fixable but still well done. Voted!
Abby is an idiot. Just saying.  Anyway, much better chapter!  There were a few puncuation/capitalization errors, easily fixable.  In the third paragraph you had a bit of a run on sentence going there.  Other than that, I like this one! Descriptions were adept, flow easily fixable but still well done. Voted!
Abby is an idiot. Just saying.  Anyway, much better chapter!  There were a few puncuation/capitalization errors, easily fixable.  In the third paragraph you had a bit of a run on sentence going there.  Other than that, I like this one! Descriptions were adept, flow easily fixable but still well done. Voted!
Abby is an idiot. Just saying.  Anyway, much better chapter!  There were a few puncuation/capitalization errors, easily fixable.  In the third paragraph you had a bit of a run on sentence going there.  Other than that, I like this one! Descriptions were adept, flow easily fixable but still well done. Voted!