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Carack

Carack

112K Reads 605 Votes 90 Part Story
AprilDay By AprilDay Completed

Teenage Gerent is thrown into a world of magic where he is expected to be a hero, but he was never a hero, just a clutz and a disappointment. Now with magic to contend with as well can he ever get things right? Unintentionally he starts on the trail of his unknown father but will he ever get home to his twin brother and his mother again?

Heavenly_heart123 Heavenly_heart123 Jul 10, 2016
Can people go check my book out I just finished the second chapter and it's called alone boy
AprilDay AprilDay Jul 29, 2011
@TheOrangutan Thanks for spotting the blips. I've picked those up. Yes, a lot of Cornish words and names in this one. Thanks for looking at this.
Deep4141 Deep4141 Jun 27, 2011
This is a very imaginatively written chapter. I like the characters already. You could do a bit of polishing to give the story a feel of an actual book- you know, correcting the punctuations. The names of the characters are not hard on the tongue and a bit wacky, so that's another plus point ! ;-)) 
atworknow atworknow Jun 16, 2011
I love this book, great writing and storytelling. It is a must read for sure!
dasWFL01 dasWFL01 Mar 21, 2011
Pretty good, but i think the begining needs to be a bit stronger. It needs to draw more attention to the readers, but otherwise i love the description!:)
AprilDay AprilDay Mar 20, 2011
@Star_catcher37 thankyou for your comments I am glad you are enjoying it - posting a first novel is a bit nerve wracking!