My estranged family and how i fell in love with a farm boy

My estranged family and how i fell in love with a farm boy

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Charlie By Little_Mystery Updated Jan 26

Lottie has what her parents call an attitude problem, but her grandfather says she just has a wild spirt that shouldnt be smothered by the city. Lottie's parents deicide to send her to Texas where she will spend the rest of her school year with her Uncle George and his family, that share their land with the Lucas'. Can they tame her so called wild ways? Or is her Grandfather right and she just needs somewhere she can roam and not be fenced in?
Logan is the one of the Lucas' seven children. He's what you call a very country kind of person. He despises everything to do with city, expecially the people. But will his oppinion change? Or will he continue to hate Lottie?

PoeticMu5ic86 PoeticMu5ic86 Feb 23, 2011
Ditto to Minnie's comment, it's better to separate lines of speech so the reader doesn't get confused about who's talking, great prologue! Most girls would freak out moving from the city to a ranch, so its a different perspective. Keep it up! And voted : )