61.8K Reads 355 Votes 1 Part Story
willowonderwall123 By willowonderwall123 Updated 6 days ago

She was followed by Ares, 
who left bloodshed 
in her wake. 
✖ ✖ ✖ 

It was Lightless, not quite dark enough to be darkness. But, somewhat in between dark and light. 

All most as if, you put your hands on your eyes, to block the raging sun. But, the sun still got though, creating a soft pink glow. It was like that. 

I softly groaned as my stiff body, awoked. Hot hands, pull me closer into the hard object of heat. 

"Shhhh, Rest angel." 

I groaned, again. Closing my eyes again. This time, it was dark.

cookie_crazy125 cookie_crazy125 Mar 18, 2016
Lovely book but I think you meant stale instead of stall in the first line
- - Jul 23, 2016
That warning was can't imagine what the rest of the story will be like *eats popcorn eagerly*
river_of_words river_of_words Mar 31, 2016
Great description, it keeps you hook to the story, with no useless ramblings, it's kind of blunt yet colorful. It works for me!
reajai reajai a day ago
How does this book have so many reads when there's only 1 chapter with a few thousand readers
reajai reajai a day ago
Damn my first time reading this book and damn shiizzz this is frikin soooo good
kookies0991 kookies0991 4 days ago
This is a really well written chapter and I really enjoyed it. This paragraph  also has wonderful (gruesome) imagery. I hope you continue this story because it is extremely well written and I enjoyed it very much. Keep up the good work! 😁