meet a psycho sister, a sexy vampire, an empty victorian house, and a crazy mom and you have Robyn's messed up life. Welcome to the world of Robyn's head enjoy your stay...
Yeah, I agree with Shirleynator, I think you're off to a great start! :D
I like it so far. :D
It got me thinking ;
"What's going to happen next?" :D
just like how any good story is suppose to be. :3
Plus your description is completley vivid that i pictured myself watching a girl right in front of me doing the exact same thing with your described scenary. :)