The Challenge [Louis Tomlinson]

The Challenge [Louis Tomlinson]

33 Part Story 9.1M Reads 141K Votes
rachel By etherachel Completed

Melanie Minor, even though she's only nineteen, has spent all her life caring about those around her. She volunteers, donates, and helps out whenever she can - but the one thing she doesn't think about is herself. Louis Tomlinson is funny, easy-going, and has let his stardom get to his head;  so what happens when their worlds collide? After his sudden break up with model Eleanor Calder, he's single again and looking for something, a challenge - and that's just what Melanie is. What happens when a simple bet from his friends to take the challenge backfires and Louis finds out there's more to Melanie than he thought?

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Just a friendly reminder: this was written about four years ago and is completely unedited. Please be kind about any factual and grammatical errors.

mellymel0298 mellymel0298 Aug 01, 2016 02:29AM
I'm crying. My first Louis fanfic and the girl he is (hopefully) going to be with has my name. Thank you ❤️❤️😩😩
You must be getting tons of visits from Niall Horan, hon. ::)
xxTy130xx xxTy130xx Aug 22, 2016 09:20PM
I'm dyslexic, I like this book already. I can be one with my people ;) lol
Gskla4 Gskla4 Aug 14, 2016 02:28AM
hole on let me just grab these four hundred pounds I carry around in my pocket every where
Bambi2 Bambi2 Aug 21, 2016 10:37PM
What does she do for money? You don't get paid for volunteering so..
summerclements summerclements Jan 23, 2016 11:59AM
Am I the only one reading this now just after he announced he had a baby