Ashes to Ashes

Ashes to Ashes

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Mistress Shadow By Shadows Completed

School is pretty boring, unless you're solving murders.

Tearra Van Hellsing is a half demon hunter sent to school for 'educational purposes'. She quickly discovers that she is in for an education alright, on how many ways someones blood can be drained. As Tearra, her cousin Nathan and their friend Keerin try to figure out the mystery behind these killings, the reality that there may be more than one killer becomes clear.

ShutinLife ShutinLife Apr 16
The man here is Tearra's father, right? Better to just refer to him as father.
KaranSeraph KaranSeraph Mar 31
Possibly this is intentional ambiguity because the narrating character doesn't know, but I believe they are called screens, especially if mobile. Ones fastened to the fireplace with doors are sometimes called doors.
KaranSeraph KaranSeraph Mar 31
I wonder if this line foreshadows psychic sense of some kind.
Ireadpast_mybedtime Ireadpast_mybedtime Nov 28, 2015
HOW IS THIS JUST THE PEOPLE I THOUGHT IT WAS, LIKE, TWO CHAPTERS WOW GOOD JOB @Shadows
fabjous fabjous Jul 13, 2015
I love ur book dou I read d second b4 d first nd u need to change ur chapter's heading,it's a bit discouraging
Bikini-So-Teeny Bikini-So-Teeny Jul 08, 2015
At first I was really confused as to what was going on, but you cleared some of the things up at first. I would consider revising the prologue and making her circumstances a bit clearer. I really liked the plot you have set up although I am not really sure what her or her family are. great chapter.