Risky isn't my middle name.

Risky isn't my middle name.

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Gabpup By Gabpup Updated Feb 12, 2011

In this story a young girl finds herself in a dangerous situation.
But what can I say besides she knew it was going to be risky.

Gabpup Gabpup Feb 12, 2011
@emmydarling  I have just finished writing part 2 of my story risky isnt my middle name....
                              If you'd be interested in reading it .... please do.
                              Thank you.
                              ~gabpup
Gabpup Gabpup Feb 12, 2011
Hope you enjoy part 2 to my story risky isnt my middle name!!!\
                              thanks
                              ~gabpup
brownielocksx brownielocksx Feb 12, 2011
this seems like it'll be a really awesome once you write more:)
trishthewriter trishthewriter Feb 12, 2011
It is off to a good start. Tianajade's right about that. You've got your readers wondering what's going to happen. That's good. In writing, you want to spell out numbers. 
tianajade tianajade Feb 11, 2011
A good start. I think you should make it longer though, and add more detail. Just wondering if you used the tab key when you wrote a new line? It's a good beginning, though (: Keep writing, and good luck!
                              
Gabpup Gabpup Feb 11, 2011
Hope you all like it. Im just beginning to write soo take it easy on the reviews......
                              But dont go too easy on me ...lol....Hpe you like!!
                              Enjoy!
                              ~Gabpup