In this story a young girl finds herself in a dangerous situation.
But what can I say besides she knew it was going to be risky.
@emmydarling I have just finished writing part 2 of my story risky isnt my middle name....
If you'd be interested in reading it .... please do.
Hope you enjoy part 2 to my story risky isnt my middle name!!!\
this seems like it'll be a really awesome once you write more:)
It is off to a good start. Tianajade's right about that. You've got your readers wondering what's going to happen. That's good. In writing, you want to spell out numbers.
A good start. I think you should make it longer though, and add more detail. Just wondering if you used the tab key when you wrote a new line? It's a good beginning, though (: Keep writing, and good luck!
Hope you all like it. Im just beginning to write soo take it easy on the reviews......
But dont go too easy on me ...lol....Hpe you like!!