A Very Bad Man (ManxMan)

A Very Bad Man (ManxMan)

49K Reads 1.8K Votes 13 Part Story
Chase By ChaseHatter Completed

Dominick Smith is seduced by a man who he immediately falls in love with. They share intimate moments together but Dominick ends up finding out that his new lover is also a married man.  (Sorry I'm not good at descriptions, This is my first boyxboy so please comment and vote) ^.^

ChaseHatter ChaseHatter Mar 01
I realize how quick that may have been. I wrote this story when I was fifteen. Since then I have become a better storyteller  and I've discovered the power of suspense :D thanks for the tip though. If I ever rewrote this story it would be amazing(ish)!!
-inamorato -inamorato Jun 19
"I was planning to meet someone," he told me. "I think I might just blow him off though. What's your name?"
                              
                              "Dominick." I told him.
                              
                              "I like that name," he complimented. "Do you let anyone call you Nicki?"
You should indent the new sentences. Makes it easier to read and less confusing.
rikki_laura rikki_laura Oct 28
Wow so much panty dropping moments in this chapter.. who needs porn haha😂😂
WhoAmI614 WhoAmI614 Mar 01
Don't mean to be 'That Guy' but love? They literally just met earlier that day... I think.
TaliyahTrane__ TaliyahTrane__ Oct 04, 2015
And a married man. Don't forget married. Just had to point that out. Kk continue.