Tails of the Deep [Major Editing]

Tails of the Deep [Major Editing]

7.7K Reads 189 Votes 7 Part Story
Clara Leia By Claraleia Updated Nov 16, 2015

'Never look at a siren in the eye'. Their ever so alluring eyes would take you into the water where they will drown you and feed on your flesh.

William 'Will' Hail has vowed to avenge his father when he was taken by sirens and killed. Never trust a pirate, they say. Will you let someone you love stop you from what you originally set out to do? And what if that someone is part of that promise you made to your father? Torn between vengeance and love, which will you choose?

  • deep
  • mermaid
  • ocean
  • pirate
  • sea
  • siren
  • tails
  • water
chocolatesrock chocolatesrock Nov 24, 2012
Love the flow of the story, its mysterious, addictive, i dont know what else. It just felt so alive!
                              Your writing really brings out characters!!
                              Amazing Job!!
                              :)
MayTijssen MayTijssen Nov 22, 2012
Ooh this story has a sort of mystery to it. The beginning really grabs you and makes you want to know more! The detail in which this is written is also outstanding ;) BTW, I have like an exact picture in my head about how they look ;) Thats how good ;P
IAmUn1qu3 IAmUn1qu3 Jun 22, 2012
Goodbye Jack Sparrow HEL-LO Wiliam Hail!!! I am SO adding this to my reading list!!
Claraleia Claraleia May 04, 2012
@puppy_love_143 Thank you so much! But they have gills on their ribcage. Haha I don't think mermaids have that. And they have greenish blue skin. But yeah I guess. They belong to roughly the same group. Haha they both have tails dont they? Hahaha!
bubblegdrop95 bubblegdrop95 Apr 24, 2012
oooh. I really like the idea of this story. Its so orginal (which I think means hasn't been written or it could be the other way around) anyways, I would probably like the idea if I kept reading cause it hooked me. Good description. :)